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Okay, I like the other pieces you showed me but I just had to comment on this one since I'm a huge fan of Ghost in the Shell. This is clearly a piece made to show off Motoko's design and I think you did just that (flaunting her design and focusing on immense detail). Besides for the wonderful detailing, I think the thing I like the most about this picture is the shading. The light source really does look like it's coming from the side - the overall shading makes Motoko pop out and seem somewhat realistic (which is always a good thing when it comes to this kind of comic book-type art). I do have several critiques though and they all pertain to Motoko's anatomy. Firstly, her face - I believe her eyes are a bit too small (which is accentuated by her sunglasses). The shading is well done on her face but something about it makes it look like it's going inwards somewhat. (I'm not quite sure how to fix that - I think it'd be a good idea to imitate the pose and then look at your face to see where the shadows fall.) And lastly, I think her arms are too stiff - in this pose, they'd be looser.
Overall, I think you're very talented. I love that you're able to draw all different types of men and women. And your shading is wonderfully lucid. Just keep going!
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